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the_rescue
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0 posted 2002-02-19 10:50 PM



Silently speak the words I long to hear
stifle all my doubts and all my fear
Whisper softly what I already know
that with your actions you always show

Let the words flow off your lips
like the river flows to the sea
let them trickle into my ears
softly like the wind in a tree

Silently speak the words I long to hear
stifle all my doubts and all my fear
whisper softly what I already know
and continue to let this love grow

My body aches for a second of your embrace
a second that turns into forever
then the glimpse of your beautiful face
lets me know we'll always be together

Silently speak the words I long to hear
and wipe away all my fear.

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1 posted 2002-02-19 11:25 PM


BEAUTIFUL!!!
keoni
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2 posted 2002-02-20 08:47 PM


THis is very nice. Beautiful poem. I enjoyed it
Jon

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"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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3 posted 2002-02-21 12:29 PM


Beautifully written and heartfelt

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

vlraynes
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4 posted 2002-02-21 12:34 PM



rescue-
Very beautiful sentiments.
Nicely done.
~Vicky

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you have not truly met the poet.
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5 posted 2002-02-21 03:16 PM


This is a gorgeous poem what more can i say great use of words. keep it up love Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

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