Teen Poetry #5 |
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Being Away from you |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Being Away From You Tears falling, Like the spring time rain. I cry for love, For heartache and pain. Those feelings felt so good, Now they bring tears. I don’t know what went bad, I can’t wait till this clears. My eyes are foggy, From crying so long. Being away from you, It feels so wrong. I’m so bored, Bored out of my mind. I’m afraid to look around, For I don’t know what I’ll find. ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*hugs you* Your words reflect what I know oh so well, but please don't be afraid, I do hope things work out for you, I know it's easier said than done, but hehe I admit I can be soo stubborn with pain and laugh at another person's optimistic poa but it does pass eventually if you want it too ![]() Kristen |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
I feel the same way about certain people....I can't give you advice, because I dont know what to say.. ~LCBS Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more... |
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trapped in my mind New Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 8 |
great post i dont know what else to say just great post |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks 4 the replies, they were much appreciated ![]() ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Dis was a weally good poem..i liked it lots ![]() ![]() life sux |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ahh yes i can relate...::hugs:: i know how you feel. Im sorry that you are away from this person and i know its difficult but it will get better in time... ![]() mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It will pass Stac....it ain't easy, but it does pass.....but if you look inside....you will find it alot quicker....(remember I'm the queen of this subject!! lmao!!) Hugs to you sweetie. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-19-2002 03:48 PM).] |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
oh wow I dont even know what to say besides beautiful and library! It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
BRAVO, BRAVO..., hehe, no honestly, I really liked this, I see this topic posted so often around here, but this was posted with such a charm, I liked it quite a bit! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Having a heartache is the worst feeling someone could ever have...But theres always someone out there that could help it go away...Great poem!!! ![]() ~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS, |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks agen, the replies are the best parts of the poem. bye ![]() ![]() ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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