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inspiredpoetwriter
Member

since 2002-01-05

Posts 104
Minnesota

0 posted 2002-02-17 06:07 PM

:(:(

Untitled?

Don’t let these tears
Fall anymore please
Wipe them away.

Don’t let my heart
Break anymore it
Will shatter and bleed.

Don’t let me be alone
Please be here at
My side so I don’t
Walk alone anymore.

Don’t let the talking
Go on when your not
Here to listen.

Don’t let my body
Freeze warm it
With your hug.

Don’t let me cut
Please take the razor
Away so no more
Scars are shown.

Don’t let me
Hurt anymore take
The hurt away.

Don’t let me be ugly
Take the ugliness
Away.

Don’t let my promises
Be broke please keep
My promises kept and
Safe.

Don’t let me hand shake
Please make them
Still.

Don’t let my soul
Be tortured anymore
Take the torture
Away.

Don’t let my memories
Fade please keep them
In my head.

Don’t let my love
Or if there is such a thing
Please don’t let it go.

Don’t let me miss
The sunrise show
Me it so I know I’m
Still alive please.

Don’t let the painting
Be if I don’t know
What it means.

Don’t let me be
Without a friend anymore
Please be that friend
And protect me please.

By: me!
:(:(

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2002-02-17 06:53 PM

Good poem here!!! I was thinking for a title I Need You...

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

gracianna
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 165
A 14 year hell

2 posted 2002-02-17 07:54 PM

How about 'Don't' as your title.

DarkAngel4361
New Member

since 2002-02-18

Posts 2
Fremont, CA

3 posted 2002-02-18 02:40 AM

I reely lyked da poem. It soo described meeh. umm....i wuz thinkin the title "don't", "help", or "hate". Theyre all simple 1 word titles. =(

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-02-18 01:37 PM

I liked everyone elses ideas for titles..they seem to go well with the poem. The poem i thought was very good...it really expresses how your reaching your hand out for help...wonderful poem

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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