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A Million Love Songs
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A Million Love Songs |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
A million love songs go through my head As I sit all alone upon my bed Simple words of simple tunes Prick my heart, which bursts like balloons The beat of the drum is the beat of my heart To which you own the tiniest part The thin line between love and hate, Is what you caused me to create I hide my misery from my mother I wish I still could see my brother He would know what I could do To defeat the hurt gained seeing you You seemed as important as my belief To which I nearly laid a wreath But I realised you wouldn’t be there Always when I feel despair In my faith I forever will boast The Father, Son and Holy Ghost. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
i'm sorry 2 hear ur hurting like this, but this wuz a good poem. keep up the nice owrk.  ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (02-16-2002 09:41 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked the flow of this and the way you expressed yourself...  |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Your emotions flowed so nicely but i am sorry to see that your emotions are pain and hurt ::hugs:: i hope you feel better soon mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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