Teen Poetry #5 |
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My first broken heart |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Today I felt what heart break was and it hurt so much inside I just swallowed up my pain And held my head with pride But my heart could not help hurting And although I tried to run there was no escape from the pain This battle heartbreak won But no heart can hide from sadness and no eyes can hide from tears my soul can't hide from heartbreak Only laugh at it in years I Know it had to happen once But it will happen many times But I guess this is adolescence and it makes for great rhymes ~LCBS [This message has been edited by LCBS (02-16-2002 03:40 PM).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Good poem here!!! Broken hearts are the worst. I actually just had my first heartbreak...And it sucks...But guys are different from girls...When girls have a broken heart they tell their friends all about it and cry...Good for you for being strong!!! ![]() ~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS, |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i like this one i really did i mean i know what it's like to have your hart broken, and haveing just such a sinking feeling you just have to hide it. and doesn't really help with writing poems. you might new at this but you do have a tallent keep up the good work and don't let anyone put you down for writing poems it's a gift |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
Hey! This poem tiz really good i loved it alot i hope it didnt realy happen to u gurl i hope ur ok! If u wonna talk i'm here..bye! 0:) ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
great poem, shows you have alot of character and great writing abilities.. lesson to all, unless your over 21, remind yourself that you will not find love at your age for it does not exist yet.. |
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mateusz New Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 7 |
I really liked your poem and im sorry if it happened to you. bad things happen but they lead to good in the end. [This message has been edited by mateusz (02-15-2002 09:08 PM).] |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
A broken heart is like a broken arm. You put a cast on it, and it is useless for a long time. You try not to use it, and it doesnt feel right with the cast on. Then one day something happens and you decide its time to take the cast off and try it out. Everything is akward at first, but it feels great to be using it again, and you can get on with your life. But sometimes if you take the cast off too soon, the arm is not healed, and it still hurts, so you must give it more time. But eventually with time, everything heals. Wow am i ever rambling. Great poem though. and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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Devils Angel 666 Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71CT, USA |
Great poem LCBS. I like this one. Very well put together. I'm sorry you had to go through that. If you want to talk about it My e-mail is [email protected] and I can give you my Screen name to talk to you on if you have Aim. I could never imagain to put anyone through that kind of "Hell." ~Dan |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww sweety ::hugs:: I am so sorry that your heart has been broken. Remember though, what doesnt kill us only makes us stronger. mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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