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Teen Poetry #5

does anybody know?

trapped in my mind
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 8

0 posted 2002-02-14 08:27 PM

more often that not an answer to a question will be
i dont know.
the question could be as simple as what are you going to do
or more important as why not
but the fact still remains
nobody knows
nobody has a clue
the richest man wont know
the poorest man wont know
im not saying I do
or if there isnt even anything to know why do we ask?
o

LCBS
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since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-02-14 08:37 PM

mmm...I dont know what to say.....(ok so that was lame) GREAT POEM!

~LCBS

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aaron woodside
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

2 posted 2002-02-15 04:09 AM

I know trust me I know... alot about nothing. I'm guilty of always saying "I don't know."

Nice write.

ex animo,
Aaron

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-02-17 12:38 PM

Hmm...interesting piece..nicely done

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2002-02-17 02:03 AM

Heh, even tho your poem is about questions and answers, I believe you're asking more questions in the poem than anything else. It's a little confusing, but I guess everything is when it comes to questions/answers... good write!

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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