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Teen Poetry #5

Love

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2002-02-15 11:38 PM

It’s something in his eyes . . .
a sparkle w/ a hold on my heart,
a twinkle which makes me want to smile,
a look that will stay w/ me ‘til the very end.

There’s something in his eyes that draws me in . . .

[This message has been edited by Cinderelly (02-15-2002 11:41 PM).]

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

1 posted 2002-02-15 11:45 PM

Short but sweet.
Great write.

~~Jeff~~

chas
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 101
Lynn, ma

2 posted 2002-02-16 12:12 PM

i'll agree with jbaker515..

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-02-16 10:23 AM

*sigh*

yes, it is always something about a guys eyes....first thing to draw me in,

that and their smile.....nicely done!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-02-17 12:29 PM

short and sweet...but its the eyes that will always draw ya in!

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

5 posted 2002-02-17 12:35 PM

What is it with eyes....they are mesmorizing....shudder....

~lisa

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