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Teen Poetry #5

i'm already dead

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2002-02-14 04:39 PM

i’ve tried to die
so many times
a compete finalization
not achieved by a rhyme

i’ve never been able to
jump, shoot, or use the knife
to get away
from the life

i dreem of it
awake in bed
but i slowly find out
i’m already dead

Thank you for your time

when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-02-14 04:52 PM

Its one of the truest poems I have ever read

We may think about it late at night, but we care about life to much to do it...

Great Post

~LCBS

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2002-02-15 09:29 AM

Find strength in you for it is there
You can email me if you need someone to talk to
Keep your head up always
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-02-15 01:55 PM

This was amazing and SO true...exactly how i feel expressed perfectly...truely an extraordinary poem!

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

gracianna
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 165
A 14 year hell

4 posted 2002-02-17 08:31 PM

I feel that way a lot...no one knows how close I have actually gotten to leaving their world of perfection...

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

[This message has been edited by gracianna (02-17-2002 11:58 PM).]

DarkAngel4361
New Member

since 2002-02-18

Posts 2
Fremont, CA

5 posted 2002-02-18 03:04 AM

Exactly how I feel! i luved da poem! it wuz lyke u were telling my lyfe!

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