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trapped in my mind New Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 8 |
how do you tell the person your feelings you wonder how they will act how they will feel but your deepest thought is "will they still be there for me when i need them" the thought of them shutting you out is terrifying you've been with this person for years you dont thing they will leave you now but they could and would they your deepest secret your deepest thought is all there for them to think upon do you want them to know it? |
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babygurl * Junior Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 30 |
all i have to say is wow... i can only imagine what that secret could be.. very good poem! i enjoyed it ALOT... keep at it! |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
if you tell them how you feel and they arent there for you, then they werent true friends Great Post ~LCBS |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
You have no clue how close to home this hits! I have so been experiencing this.. Welcome to PIP by the way! The poem you have here is great I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing! ~jen Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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-Queth- Junior Member
since 2002-02-10
Posts 35Canada |
First of all, welcome to PIP! -smiles- I'm hoping you'll like it here! I thought this was great in how you were so reflective in this piece. The thought was something we all pretty much think about when we're thinking of that "significant" other. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us! Q.u.e.t.h. Everything in between... |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Welcome to passions. I liked this piece because it shows the process we all go through in our relationships when we are deciding if this person is, well worth keeping around. This was a nice post and I hope to hear more from you soon ex animo, Aaron There are no great men, only men in great circumstances. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
First off... WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! This was a great post!!! It really shows how you feel on this specific subject and it really talks about a lot of peoples fears and wonders. Thanks for sharing, i cant wait to read more from you!!! P.S.- Check ur e-mail for a special greeting  mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to passions!!! I hope that you enjoy it here!!! Great first post!!! Some secrets are meant to be told the others are not...And if you think its gonna ruin the friendship then there never really was a friendship... I hope to see more work by you soon!!! ~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS, |
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