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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
with people all around me I am still alone with my “friends” in my room I am still the only one home in school I am still alone with life moving around me I am still not shown when they say the understand I am still alone with people calling i still haven’t used the phone talking to myself I am still alone being stuck in the past my mind hasn’t grown Thank you for your time |
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mateusz New Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 7 |
I know what you mean because we all feel alone many times. your poem is very good, check mine out sometime  |
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babygurl * Junior Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 30 |
very good poem... it was powerful.. i liked it! |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Welcome! I like this it was so well done and i agree with a lot of the emotions that are shown in this poem. Very well written! See ya around! ~jen |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I know exactly how you feel..its as if you can be in a crowd of people but yet feel the loneliest you've ever been before...horrible feeling ::hugs:: mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome what a sad feeling, that in a crowded room you feel so alone, I know just how that feels, I think most can relate Please check your email for a special greeting! [This message has been edited by SEA (02-17-2002 01:41 AM).] |
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