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Hot_black_angel16 New Member
since 2002-02-12
Posts 5CT, USA |
being invisible being not herd being ignored not being seen that is all I am not seen by the world walking the halls every day and seeing the one I love and not being enable to say any thing cause I am invisible to her kills me ever day bit by bit making me think that I am insignificant to her and the world when she is walking toured me I think that this will be the day my heart pound's and pound’s but instead she jest walks right by me and goes to someone else cause I invisible and unimportant to her not being seen by the one I love hurts me deeply makes me what to do unintelligent things to my self like comparing my self to the ones she goes out with and changing my self because I think that is the kind of person she wants me to be |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
i'm sorry that is how you feel sorta how i feel but for different reasons. have you ever tried talking to her? hope everything works out for the best! ttfn as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome to Passions! This was a really good first post plus it was one i could relate to myself. Nicely done hun...Cant wait to read more from you!! P.S.- Check ur e-mail for a special greeting!! mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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Devils Angel 666 Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71CT, USA |
Good First poem Bart. You expressed your feelings well in this one. You MUST tell me who these "girls" that you are refering to in this poem are!! and it best not be who I'm thinking of because you know why.....!! |
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