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Hot_black_angel16
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since 2002-02-12
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CT, USA

0 posted 2002-02-12 05:05 PM


being invisible
being not herd
being ignored
not being seen
that is all I am not seen by the world

walking the halls every day and seeing
the one I love and not being enable
to say any thing cause I am invisible to her
kills me ever day bit by bit making me think
that I am insignificant to her and the world

when she is walking toured me
I think that this will be the day
my heart pound's and pound’s
but instead she jest walks right
by me and goes to someone else cause I
invisible and unimportant to her

not being seen by the one I love hurts me deeply
makes me what to do unintelligent things to my self
like comparing my self to the ones she goes out with and changing my self because I think that is the kind of person she wants me to be

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sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19
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1 posted 2002-02-12 05:10 PM


i'm sorry that is how you feel sorta how i feel but for different reasons.  have you ever tried talking to her?  hope everything works out for the best! ttfn

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

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2 posted 2002-02-12 07:37 PM


Welcome to Passions!

This was a really good first post plus it was one i could relate to myself. Nicely done hun...Cant wait to read more from you!!

P.S.- Check ur e-mail for a special greeting!!

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Devils Angel 666
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since 2001-11-30
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3 posted 2002-02-15 09:23 PM


Good First poem Bart.  You expressed your feelings well in this one.  You MUST tell me who these "girls" that you are refering to in this poem are!!  and it best not be who I'm thinking of because you know why.....!!
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