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babygurl * Junior Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 30 |
You Are Special Your presence is a present to the world You're unique and one of a kind Your life can be what you want it to be Take the days just one at a time Count your blessings, not your troubles You'll make it through whatever comes along Within you are so many answers Understand, have courage, be strong Don't put limits on yourself So many dreams are waiting to be realized Decisions are too important to leave to chance Reach for your peak, your goal, your prize Nothing wastes more energy than worrying The longer one carries a problem, the heavier it gets Don't take things too seriously Live a life of serenity, not a life of regrets Remember that a little love goes a long way Remember that a lot... goes forever Remember that friendship is a wise investment Life's treasures are people... together Realize that it's never too late Do ordinary things in an extraordinary way Have health and hope and happiness Take time to wish upon a star And don't ever forget... Even for a day... How very special you are. This really isnt written for anyone and i didnt completely write it all myself... a couple of my friends helped me on this one... but i really like it and i think it is well done... one of my longer pieces! i told you guys id be back at it soon!! i should have more for you soon too!! |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
wow! this is excellent, if only more people realized how special they were...I loved this....I can not wait to read more... ~LCBS |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hey Jackie! Not bad! The rhyming really makes it easier on the mind to read! Okay, I'm depressed right now and can't comprehend much! I had to read it over a few times before I actually got it---but once it sank in, I finally got it! ^_^ Yayness!!! Good job! Nice to see you back! Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This definately describes how you feel about this person very well..nicely done! mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
This is a wonderful poem, dosen't matter if it's a collaboration, it's still good. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Wow! thanks for reminding me that I am special. I really needed that reminder today. Great poem. Dawn |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This piece has such a positive outlook this is really good hope eveyone else reads this so, bump this back up there thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
This is brill it really made me think, when your having a hard time like I am its great for people to write and say things like this, it really made me take a rain check. Thank you |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I liked this poem a lot thank you for the good read. these are words everyone needs to hear every s often so that they dont foret. |
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babygurl * Junior Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 30 |
thanks for the great reply's guys... makes me feel good.. i havent had the best days lately but i read my poem over again and it inspired me.. im working on another one and ill have it on here soon |
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trapped in my mind New Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 8 |
this is the sort of thing that everybody needs to hear once in a while to lift there spirits. it certainly lifted mine this is really great |
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