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That jerk has got to go
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That jerk has got to go |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
I hate to see him hurt you You don't deserve this pain What does he get from doing this Do your tears help him gain I hate to see you look like this your life has been so tough and you don't need him to be whole Tell him that you have had enough He makes you feel like its your fault But your the nicest person I know So please dont let him push you around That jerk has got to go Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more... |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Lisa, Sounds like a friend of yours has been hurt pretty badly. Also sounds as if you are being a great friend to her and supporting her. I really liked this poem. Dawn |
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AllThatGlitters4321 Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45 |
I thought that was really good...I had a friends just like that in a bad situation...It's nice to see that you will stick by her. Hopefully she realizes that he does have to go  ....NICE JOB!!!! |
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AllThatGlitters4321 Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45 |
I thought that was really good...I had a friends just like that in a bad situation...It's nice to see that you will stick by her. Hopefully she realizes that he does have to go ....NICE JOB!!!! |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Let's take him out back and beat him! I mean... Very well expressed. The person should be happy to have such a caring friend. Also the set up to this poem was awesome it flow great. Good job! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Voiceless, thanks for finding the voice to reply I agree, you hodl him down and I will hit him ~LCBS |
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