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AllThatGlitters4321
Junior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 45

0 posted 2002-02-11 01:58 PM

I lay and wonder,
what is wrong.
Why you haven't loved me,
For so very long.
Why you never act,
Like you care.
When i need you the most,
you're never there.
I think of all,
The things we've shared.
What happenend to when,
when you once cared?
I try to make it,
So we'll get along.
But sometimes I think,
you are too far gone.
I stand and wait for you,
you walk right by.
Maybe i'm mistaken,
But hearts don't lie.
My heart is telling me,
You want to move on.
But what will i do,
Once you are gone?

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-02-11 02:00 PM

Awww hun ::hugs::...this is tough and i hope you dont lose your love with this person. Nicely written

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

2 posted 2002-02-11 02:00 PM

Wow! This is simply amazing...I know EXACTLY how you feel on this subject. I often find myself asking myself similar questions...

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

3 posted 2002-02-11 06:52 PM

I have felt this way very often. Great poem.

Dawn

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

4 posted 2002-02-11 07:30 PM

GREAT!!
(I'll leave it at that
cause that says it all)

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

5 posted 2002-02-11 09:40 PM

Awww I loved the poem! I know exactly how you feel, although I have found myself on both sides. This is a wonderful peice of work.

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

6 posted 2002-02-11 10:05 PM

Most of us have been here before... It's hard to let go, but sometimes it is for the best... Keep your head high, you love him with all your heart. You will always love him and nothing will change that. Your life will move on eventually, but it's not always easy.!! We are here for you always!

MelZ!!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

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