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So long, Goodbye |
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SlowDrag Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 53Tx...need i say more |
I know it's long, but i really think you'll enjoy the end if you read it all  this is the story of a poor boy down on his luck kept underneath the thumb because he was young. the world was slothing by there's nothing new left to try. such a big man refusing to cry he's still so young. he chased his tail for quite some time doors and clocks and phones chime through his mind. shuffle through days with his bitter smile he felt so numb. so he got some strange tattoo he thought he knew what he had to do this would be final waterloo when he was done. so he sat on his bed and wrote this letter that no one ever read. he addressed it to the world and this is what it said... Chorus: So long life i'm movin on to better things so long misery i can't stand you - you dont need me so long innocence i've outgrown naivete' so long life the word i finally can say" he closed by scribling his last goodbye we're never gonna live it down "i'm getting out while i can... i dont know why they say these things why do they have to tell the truth.. cuz that's what's happening to me.." bridge: crooked thoughts zig-zags lolly gags. as time just drags through open sores and metaphores. and words that rhyme. my dreams are daring me to test in me to try to be so then i see some way. see what you could.. see what you know... Hello life i know i've been gone so long hello happiness i admit that i was wrong hello innocence i finally found the one right thing hello life i think i'm finally happy i think i'm finally happy i think i finally can say so long goodbye (so long goodbye) so long goodbye (so long goodbye) "Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..." [This message has been edited by SlowDrag (02-08-2002 01:42 AM).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was really great!!!! I enjoyed it a lot and you were right....i did enjoy the ending  mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Excellent....great escape poem.... ~LCBS |
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