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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2002-02-08 02:41 AM


I feel this emotion
churning deep inside.
It's eating at my brain...
drying out my soul...

A molten brew of confusion
burning deep within.
It's ruling all my choices...
freezing all my freedom...

I feel this aching need
luring my heart and mind.
It's controlling all my wantings...
slowing all my conscience...

A rush of lonely love
pouring over my heart and mind.
It's tempting all my weaknesses...
surpassing all my dreams...



“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (02-08-2002 02:42 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-08 08:03 AM


Sometimes our feelings just completely overcome us...you expressed yourself well here hun..nicely done

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Lennon2002
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since 2002-01-10
Posts 31
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2 posted 2002-02-08 09:35 PM


Nice post Tifferoke

Time you enjoy wasting, was not wasted- John Lennon
You made no preparation for my reputation once again- Noel Gallagher

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