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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
You've stabbed me in the back, one to many times. I'm furious right now, I can't believe this even rhymes. You said you liked me, yet you went after her. My feelings for you right now, are in such a blur. You've broken my heart, into a thousand tiny peices. When you finally leave, is that when all this pain ceases? Can't you see right now, all I want is love. And when my hand fits in your, just like a perfect glove......... I thought we had it made, but I guess you had a surprise for me. I must have been wrong, my love you just couldn't see......  I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park [This message has been edited by Love's Addiction (edited 07-10-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
emotionally sad...yet quite powerful...this was expressed well...hope things are better  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow very sad, but it was very strong......the words hit. nicely done here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This was a very emotional poem and it was very well written. Keep writing! ^*~Kicking Kim~*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
hey all, thanks 4 the replies...glad u enjoyed it. I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....i'm outta touch.......-Linkin Park |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Quite emotional, I can tell this poem was felt by you. Sad,yet it was very powerful, and a great poem. Good job. - Cody - |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Great poem. It was very emotional. Keep up the great work. *Amanda* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
 Wonderful! I truelly enjoyed this, Love's Addiction. It was great! So sad, yet strong and filled with emotion. [This message has been edited by Spice (edited 07-10-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is so sad. Hope things are better now. You'll find someone that'll treat you like a queen. Thanks for sharing. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
nice, way to share such strong emotions, I really enjoyed it. I have been there,just never knew how to express my emotions. thanks for the read. ~Hill~ Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!! |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
This was great...eventhough it was sad...it was so very powerful. I am glad you realized that this person's feelings werent true, eventhough I know it has to hurt. I hope things get better and much luck to ya! ~Nikki~ It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them. |
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