Teen Poetry #5 |
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let me live |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
no one seems to understand but then again no one seems to care walking through this life of mine so lost so unprepared not sure what this life is going to give me not really sure what to expect i'm so scared i'll lose everthing that i'll be left alone so scared to b alone yet in some ways think it would probably be safer i'm not sure what i'll do if you hurt me again how i will stand i don't want you to know this pain you cause me so cold hearted towards me you don't even know me you don't even care so ready to make judgements against me so ready to ruin my life wanting to keep my life together all i ask is that you leave me alone let me be let me live as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
No one can make you feel bad unless you allow them to I hope things get better for you thanks for the beautiful read keep em coming là où est mon amour? |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
I'm sorry things are bad for you and I'm not just saying this but I know how you feel. Hang in there cause things will get better although it may take time! A lovely poem tho! I really liked it! ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*hugs scarlet* just wanted to point out something hun. "as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u." <~ this is your signature.. it's true scarlet, only you can decide if it makes or breaks you. you wrote this well hun, made it possible for us to feel your anguish and pain. hope everything turns out for the best hun. tiffany ![]() “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Not everyone doesnt care...we're here for you! Great emotion... ~LCBS |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im gonna echo wat she jus said ^...we definately care for you ![]() mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
thank you guyz i was just feeling so low that day because i let things build up till they get to the point where i feel worthless and didn't know how to fix things but thank you for your concern =D and hey tifferz =D |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
If people are your real friends or care about you, you should tell them when they hurt you cause otherwise they can't change their behaviors Dawn |
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gracianna Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 165A 14 year hell |
Sounds a bit like a poem I posted a little earlier... I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.' |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
You may think that nobody understands, but as you can already see, everybody understands how you feel. "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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