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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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Hey guys.  This is probably going to be my last post for a while...I just don't feel the pipfire anymore, I guess. And its beginning to actually be uncomfy here, but thats probably because I'm such a slacker and don't take the initiative to get to know people. For those I haven't spoken with, I apoligize. And to those that I've kinda ignored lately, I'm sorry...this isn't goodbye, only goodnight, I spose...A hundred droplets wandering masked by hues of golds and blues Meshing, entwining, and finding solace in a still and sacred pilgrimage Shadowing, with hungry greys, the moon that's lit by a hundred suns -- mothers just bearing their beginnings, reaching with fiery limbs to their daughters. These children, so like gems, magestic in birth and moreso in death -- masses of gas and purple flame, churning within their own nuclei until the moment that their mothers turn their backs, and they might cascade... Toward my hands, chilled with hatred for the very skies we're forced to inhale, I'm warmed with burning reminders of a hundred years |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Yup, you're a slacker. Get to know people, damnit!  Carly, this didn't have your ususal spark behind it. It seemed to lack something that I just can't put my finger on. Anyway, hopefully we'll all see you around here sometime soon. ~AF~ Never speak disrespectfully of Society. Only people who can't get into it do that. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
That very loss of spark is another reason I'm taking this lil break...Well thanks for your reply EJ. Peace to ya. ~Carly Speak softly and carry a beagle. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
wow this is lovely carlAy. great imagery. u painted a beautiful picture with ur words. great job. to the library me thinks *nods* *hugs* i would say id miss u here, but i havent really been here much either lately. but atleast i still get to c u sis :p love you hun *hugs* tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I'm no good at judging spark, however I do like this. But I've already told you that!! You are a great writer, and I hope you'll come to feel that "fire" once again. *enormous hugs*Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this on Sissy carly. It's sad to see you leave but you weren't much participating anyway, Thats ok! I hope to see you come back soon!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
Ms. astrologist!...you better be lying! ...heh..but i'll truly miss your wonderful poems...as i know what you mean about the your reference of the *spark*...and this poem was nice...i enjoyed the read...as i hope to see your poems again..soon [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-10-2001).] |
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thedarkangel Member
since 2001-05-12
Posts 74~*~the cutest~*~ |
i really liked this one carly, i've never read any of your others but i thought that this one was great! laura ~*~ Be honest and don't follow fads and fashion. do what you do and do it well ~*~jon bon jovi~*~ |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
Awesoem imagery! i really liked it. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Very interesting poem and a very interesting title. I liked this one, hope you keep writing. "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Great job on this poem. We'll miss you and your poetry here at Piptalk. Hopefully you'll feel the Pipfire again soon and come back. *Amanda* |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
Hey babe! i'm sorry that you lost the fire. oh well. i still love ya!! the poem was fantastic as usual.  you are such the bomb-diggadi writer! you so rock!! we have to get together when i come back from Kentucky. ya know to work on Dream Lore. Peace out babe! love ya always, d |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This poem was lacking something, as EJ said. I can't put my finger on it, but it was different. I'm sorry to see you go. I hope you come back soon I'll miss you. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Mykels_Angel Junior Member
since 2001-06-25
Posts 38australia |
this is really good keep up the good work! |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Missing some of the usual fire, but still a great read... hope your not gone for too long Carly.... Zu |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Enjoyed the read Carly Yes, I haven't seen you much in here anymore That's ok, that's how you feel.... thanks for sharing again hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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