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At Nigth
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At Nigth |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180
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Sometimes at nigth, in the dark, I am crying For all the things I can't escape For all my heavy thougths I always think of it I can't give myself a break Always, Always, Always On my mind ...How long can I take it? days pass, weeks pass, I don't even notice I've had enough of life for a while Therefor I'm crying Sometimes I sleep Sleep is freedom My mind is at ease Sleep is good Asleep I don't think Asleep I am free Sometimes I open my window Looks out on the city ligths Feeling like a prisoner In my own apartment Sometimes I scream Use all my strength Try to get it out Sometimes it works Sometimes not Wonder if anyone notice me Wonder if anyone can see Am I invisible? No one seems to see me Im crashed I have no life Uninvited Far behind Vulnerable Shut Out small alone I am always myself. Isn't that enough for you? |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
this poem was powereful to me maybe because I know I've felt this way many times before....good work Keep Writing  ~Jenna-Nicole~ The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was a great poem. Very emotional. This is the first of yours that I recall reading. I loved it. Thanks for the great read. *Amanda* |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
i agree i think this is very powerful i can relate to this a lot! i hope all is well....and i think me and you should talk sometime! i think we would relate a lot to each other....email me or something!  story of my life: I am so self destructive, I turn solutions into problems. Everything i touch i ruin. Im midas in reverse |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
To me you write a lot of powerful poetry. This is not different from that reputation. I really liked this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
So powerful! You pour every emotion you have into each word of your writing. I love that about your poetry. Great write, Zarina. I enjoyed this- as always. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
emotional with full of power...i liked the poem ...great job!im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very emotional and expressive poem. Hope things get better thanks for the read hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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