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Dear sweet love of Mine
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Dear sweet love of Mine |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
here's a poem me n mah friend did today! Date 2/6/02 Dear sweet love of mine Why can't you see that i'm aching inside To feel your body close to mine Hold your heart in my hands Look in your eyes to see the sparkles Start to fly.. Dear sweet love of mine On the inside I begin to die Why can't I let go of my pain, Let my sprits be lifted up high I love you so much It makes me cry.. Dear sweet love of mine When you smile It makes me weak The fear held inside You take it away with your Beautiful warmth.. Dear sweet love of mine Time passes And my heart is still loving you The feelings I have for you Nothing in this world could be more true.. Dear sweet love of mine What's running through my mind Is what my heart has to hide Those feelings that won't fly The moon shines so bright I can see our love is right.. Dear sweet love of mine As I lay my head down at night A million thoughts of you Take over my mind I can't wait until we're together Time is being so unkind.. Dear sweet love of mine I cant think of much more to write These words will tell you that My love for you is forever... ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Wow, you expressed your feelings well...great job....can't wait until I read more ~LCBS |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I thought the format was cute how you sorta kinda made it like a letter...plus the poem in itself was sweet and full of emotion  Nicely done!mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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Baby_Angel123 Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 63Unity, ME |
Hey I really liked your poem. It was filled with a lot of emotions. I can so realate to it. Great work. Keep it up ~Heather~ |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
inspiredpoetwriter, I loved the style of this, how you write it to look like a love letter you are writing. This is a very beautiful poem. Dawn |
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