Teen Poetry #5 |
Still Just a Dream |
KidS128111 Junior Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 13Northern California |
Who’s out there for me Alone, that’s what I am My heart beats for only one Yet that one is not here With her heart beating next to mine I’m saddened by the fact That sometimes love is not enough Where the one you love doesn’t love you back Some people call it the real world So do I live a fake life? My feelings for her extend through all barriers I accept her for who she is I love her for all her positives and all her negatives Her smile lifts me when I’m at my lowest Like a ray of sunshine on a rainy day One day I hope to kiss her As she’s dressed in white And I’m in my penguin suit After I confess all that I feel to you to the whole world I’ll kiss you Then many years from now We’ll look back at our present time right now Have a good laugh about it And when it’s all said and done There’ll be only one thing left to do I’ll hold you in my arms till you fall asleep Let you have “your side” of the bed Look up at the ceiling Tell you that I’ll never love anyone like you And then I’ll wake up |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh..... I love this |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a really great piece...wonderful job!! BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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KidS128111 Junior Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 13Northern California |
thanks for the replies, means a lot to me knowing that someone likes it. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
just 5 words......I love your writing style keep it up là où est mon amour? |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
OMG why can't a guy write something like that for me? *jaw drops to the floor* I am truly a hopeless romantic!! and I adore your words..especially the part where you will accept her for her..!! a poet after my own heart Kristen |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
i know exactly how u feel when u say that your not loved back, ive been there before. don't worry though it will get better. i liked your poem, i can relate to it. |
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