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Devils Angel 666
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since 2001-11-30
Posts 71
CT, USA

0 posted 2002-02-01 08:28 PM



Sorry it's been awhile Since my last post but this one has been in the workings for a while because it was put on hold while I did other things that I needed to do.There are parts of an old poem that I had wrote mixed in here but most of it is brand new that I wrote the other night.Hope you like it.
~Dan

I love you so much,
That it's hard to explain.
My love is soo deep,
That I can't begin to explain my love,
Or express my love for you,
In words.

Since I met you,
You've made my world a bigger,
Brighter place.
You give me something to look forward to.

When your lips touch mine,
I Become utterly speechless.
I become so overwhelmed,
With the feeling of love for you,
That I cannot express it in words.

Every time we kiss,
I get the feelings like,
When we first kissed.
The feelings of excitement,
The feelings of Happiness,
And the unexplainable feelings,
Deep inside my body.

Must Be True Love.

Every time we are together,
I get strong feelings like I've never had before.
And Every time it's the same.
When I hold you in my arms,
All My problems are forgotten.
"I'm the luckiest man in the World!"
Is what I say to myself.

I'm so Lucky and happy to have you,
That I weep because I'm so full,
Of love and Happiness,
That I cannot control myself.
I would offer you the World!
Just for your love and Happiness.
I tell you that every chance I get.
I tell you I would give you the moon,
And all the stars in the sky,
As a small gift to you.
For my love for you is so great and strong,
That it is more,
and goes beyond the stars in the sky.
That is goes beyond anything,
Man could ever explain.

Then you tell me,
That you don't want any of that.
That you don't want anything,
But me and my love for you.
That you don't want anything,
But the satisfaction of being able,
To love me and know,
That you mean that much,
And soo much more to me.

And to know that,
You and I,
will be One,

Forever.

Dedicated to my Love Heather with all my heart and mroe.

© Copyright 2002 Dan - All Rights Reserved
Baby_Angel123
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since 2001-10-12
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1 posted 2002-02-01 09:05 PM


Hey hun loved your peom. It really expresed your love for me. I love you with all my heart. And always will

~Your Baby Angel~

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2 posted 2002-02-02 01:23 AM


Aww what a cute poem!!! Very sweet

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