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chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

0 posted 2002-01-31 12:22 PM

A silent leaf that trembles fair
And basks within the open air
And sighing softly, touched the ground
And swirled a puddle all around.

  Dreaming landscapes, raptured love
Tainted skies that loom above
Tangled clouds that bare a storm
As rainbows die, their souls transform.

Whispy wind, he laughs aloud
At silly little cirrus clouds
That imitate and strive to be
  Like breaths of air, or summer breeze.

A chilly stone that cools a hand
That grasps it tightly in the sand
  Inspected first, then glanced across
A river's stream, a careless loss.

Feathers grace the wirey grass
In blankets,   soft as angel dreams
That search for minds, and sometimes pass
The minds that break the winter's seams.

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Okee, forgive me, but I'm still getting back into the habit of rhyming. *grumble~~* -_-; I sort of stopped writing, as you could tell from the "time" poem that I am disappointed with. BAH. What was I doing? Anywho, consider this a rhymer-dimer, or, a poem worth no more than a dime of your time. ^_^ Enjoy at your leisure. ^^

-Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

[This message has been edited by chasing rain (01-31-2002 12:26 AM).]

dastard
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 55
in tearing silence

1 posted 2002-01-31 08:39 AM

this poem [ <== see what I chose to call it

] is definitely worth a lot more than a dime of my time... indeed great!

"Pain doesn't hurt when it's all you've ever felt" ~Marie, the girl of a thousand truths

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

2 posted 2002-01-31 06:00 PM

This is great. Don't sell yourself short!! I think its wonderful you can rhyme so well,these are the poems I have the most trouble with. Im quite impressed!

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

3 posted 2002-01-31 06:42 PM

ugh leah. u always just make me so darn jealous. i wish i had half the skill you do. youre one of my fav poets here and its always worth my time to read a poem of yours. they just keep getting better and better. keep writing hun and i agree, dont sell yourself short. you're a great poet/writer. *hugs*
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-02-01 02:57 PM

Very well written and descriptive!! Nicely done

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2002-02-01 04:28 PM

You're amazing. You rule. You're poetry astounds me.

Sorry, too mcuh? LMAO...

Back to the poem, beautifully written, wonderful ryhme, and another piece of proof you have great talent, much more then I.

Well done, my friend.

Sincerely,
Titus

"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. And inside of a dog, it's too dark to read."
-Groucho Marx

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