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a downer |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams 
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life is slipping away fading out everyday but i guess thats okay cause life sucks anyway the world is falling apart breaking off in the dark but at least thats a steady start ending a broken heart all good things must end but how i loved you friend regardless of the sin now let the grief begin |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
You definately express your feelings well and you get the across clearly. Im sorry your feeling so down..::hugs:: BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*hugs* this is touching....I hope you are ok  |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
don't expect much in life everything we have to work for even happiness be strong and keep than chin up thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Pretty sad poem here. I liked the formatting and ryhme scheme of it. Very hard time in your life, good luck  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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