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Love Lost |
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babygurl * Junior Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 30 |
September, October, the darkness grows The chill winter wind wraps her in its arms Freezing the teardrops Never to melt the ice in her veins Remembering the joy they once shared She looks in the mirror and no one is there The ending, so swift, yet, love's still alive The past is the present, it can't be denied Spoken for then... but no longer needed A heart in two pieces, cut so deep A love, she thought, they were meant to keep She knows her heart will never be free Never to love again She reflects on the past Soft flowers in a datebook From a happier time The voice that caressed The love that enflamed Words, remembered with a sad smile Hopes for a future, that wasn't to be Not understanding, this twist to destiny The sunset loses its beauty The wind carries her away Another end to a long lonely day Blue eyes watching the darkness She sits through the night Wondering why... Oh why Must his memory linger ....... this has nothing really to do with whats going on in my life i just like the poem... my friends and i wrote it a very long time ago.... VERY long time ago |
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babygurl * Junior Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 30 |
well i figured i would be the first reply in this thing.. lol.. this poem is about a friend of mine and her boyfriend now... who was her boyfriend before then i wrote this when they broke up and now they are going out agin... weird eh? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Such a shame that the only reply to this poem was yourself. It surely is a wonderful piece of poetry and would recommend it to anyone. I enjoyed it! Regardless of this being a part of your life or not, you truly exemplify the feelings through the view of a caring friend. Well done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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