Teen Poetry #5 |
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I Hate You |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
I hate the way I loved you the way I always said forever I hate the way you made me feel when you looked into my eyes I hate the way no matter what you could do no wrong I hate the way you made me feel when you walked out my door I hate the way it felt when we said let's just be friends I hate the way you sounded when you said I miss you and still love you I hate the fact that I believed you even when you said a year or two I hate the things I hear about you even though I know they're true I hate the person you've turned into even though I know you never changed for me but what I hate the most is the fact that I hate you so much when I know that I loved you too much |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
whoa do I ever know how this is. Im in the same boat hang in there babe....great post. *for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time* |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh hon! I loved this one... it just brought tears to my eyes... especially the last line. *hugs* Keep writing... it's the best way to get through it. If you ever need a listening ear, my inbox is always open. Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a cute poem..brought back memories..thanks for sharing and keep em coming! BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Yeah this brings back alot of bad memories but it's still a really good poem.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Ahh, yes... love/hate relationships and feelings for someone certainly sucks, huh? Give it time.. and keep writing about it. Tis great therapy ![]() Be well. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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sad brown eyes Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 19Connecticut U.S |
that poem brings back alotofmemoriesandihave tosay that its my favorite. keep it up!!! |
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