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DayDreamer99 Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 72 |
Walk Away Seeing you walk by me In a way makes me sad Sad because I lost you Sad because you gave up on me Even though you passing by is a second The sad, dreadful feeling seems To last an eternity By:Tiffany |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
Nice post, I Love the short ones... managed to make a good point. Nice post What would you say if I said to you, it's not in what you say, it's in what you do? |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I know all too well how this feels and its amazing how a second can feel like eternity...nicely done...  BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aargh, how true is that?! That last line hit me! I enjoyed this. Very nice work I hope to see more soon. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Nicely done. I too enjoyed the last line. Keep it up my friend. Titus "Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. And inside of a dog, it's too dark to read." |
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