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china doll Junior Member
since 2002-01-20
Posts 22 |
Some people say girls have no respect for their bodies...I don't think that's the case. There is this longing inside that I cannot describe, and it kills me because I can't even understand why.I keep it bottled up inside, but here's for those girls that may be able to relate: Feel his heart Pressed against mine Long for his touch so heavenly divine. Take in his warmth his body, his soul to fill in that part of my heart so cold. Tempt him to ache no control of desire- No one to tell you your playing with fire. To give in to hunger Is it a sin? To not feel the pain embedded within. Careless whispers Into the night Time remains frozen Until the early light. Back to reality Don't take me away! I need this quick fix- cause soon it will fade. when I go back my feelings are numb- Until I realize What I've just Done. |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
While I don't feel this ache like you do, I do understand poetry, and this is a wodnerful poem. Nicely done.  Titus Find me a pidgeon, and then I'll know where Zu and Sky are. |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
as a male, I obviously can't relate.but very nice post. I like the style and rhythm...nice imagry too  What would you say if I said to you, it's not in what you say, it's in what you do? |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
It's so sad that humans are blind... This is...wow. A really realistic read. What made it even better was the flow and the rhyme! ^_^ So nice. An impressive work here. Very nicely done. I'm really liking your work so far. Keep it up! -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow, this was a really amazing piece of poetry and very realistic which i think is great....i dont know what to say other than this was an amazing piece BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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