Teen Poetry #5 |
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Days Like This |
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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
Days Like This I hate days like this When she leaves my bro and sis Even me behind Only to be left in our minds. I know it happens to all of us Them leaving is a must But since I was six We have been in this fix. She takes us everywhere in her heart And her bragging is like a work of art Every once in awhile we get a call or a e-mail that says "Hey, All!". Our life can be tough But her love is enough. To know she is on the road here and there Is our biggest scare. She gets in her car To travel a far And the moment she's gone That's when I begin to miss her! *I love you where ever you are!May the Highway Angel watch over you! ![]() Put your past behind you, not you past in front of you! |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
AAWWW! I take it she left today? *hugs to Amy* I've never realised this is how you feel when she goes ![]() Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A very touching piece of poetry, keep on posting so I can more of your great poetry. ![]() Andrew Find me a problem a pigeon can't solve and I'll find you a pigeon to solve it. |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
This poem is lovely! I hope the highway angel watches over her too! hang in there and don't worry, she'll be fine! Great poem too! Keep up the good work! ![]() ![]() |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im shur that the highway angel is keeping a close eye on her...she'll be fine im shur ![]() yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
Thank you everyone. It is quiet hard when she leaves. Sometimes I just want to cry. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is lovely... but it must be hard getting to know the back of her head to well. ![]() Well done. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Amy, I can tell you that you have found a fan in one of the best writers in here (Zu!). Keep writing darling, I'm gonna start hounding you if you don't ![]() Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon |
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