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0 posted 2002-01-26 03:23 PM


My mind is my utopia
My refuge from the world
Every apprehenison a distant dream
Every thought a rhapsody


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1 posted 2002-01-26 04:28 PM


I liked your poem, very short and sweet. I hope to see more of your work in the future.

Find me a problem a pigeon can't solve and I'll find you a pigeon to solve it.

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2 posted 2002-01-26 11:27 PM


Ditto w/zu..short and sweet I liked it

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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3 posted 2002-01-28 07:08 PM


Wow, short and concise... but so much is said in those 4 lines.
I loved this.. very thought-provoking.
Well done!

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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