Teen Poetry #5 |
Lucky |
Starnite Junior Member
since 2001-07-05
Posts 41Wisconsin |
Lucky I am lucky to have a friend like you You understand everything I'm going through Like with boys and life in general You tell me your problems I tell you mine We both listen I even let you cry on my shoulder I really want you to know I am here And I will always be To go throught things together And not together To give me advice about boys The ones you know Tell me if their pushy or not or a player I thank you for being my friend From not to when ever I am the luckiest person... ...To have a friend like you! |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
Aw friendship certainly is a wonderful thing! sounds like you ARE really lucky to have such a great friend! Keep Writing ~Jenna-Nicole~ The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
A friend like this is a true find indeed! |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
This is great! It reminds me of me and my best friend. besides the fact that we are probably weirder! Good job! ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Awww. That was really sweet. I am sure that your friend feels the same way about you! *Amanda* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good to see such a close friendship there. Nice poem. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet and nice...the friendship you protrayed shows a bond that is strong..i hope it stays that way...thanks for sharing it im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Aww that was sweet. I hope you showed your friend. Well done. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Everyone is lucky to have such good friends. You're deserving of friends like these - we all are This is a very sweet poem, and very well written. Nice work, and thanks for the good read --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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