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Ski*Chick
Member

since 2001-01-13

Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

0 posted 2001-07-07 07:25 PM

Thinking about tomorrow what is it going to be?
Is it going to be harder than today?
Are my legs going to bug me tomorrow?

Thinking about next year
Will I keep in touch with all my friends?
Or will I lose all of them?

I keep thinking
This time it’s about my dad
How is he in heaven?

Watching me when no ones home
Watching me as I start to graduate
Because he taught me a lot about life

Minna

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-07-07 11:39 PM

this was heartfelt...i too wonder too much about tomorrow...well..great job on writing this out, Minna

...wish you well.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

TunaKaHuna
Junior Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 19
United States

2 posted 2001-07-08 01:00 AM

So sorry to hear about your dad. Your poem is very good, and I liked it a lot. You show just the right amount of remorse needed in such few short words then others, yet they are still so powerful. Just remember the movie "Annie"-

"Tomorrow, Tomorrow, you're only a day AAAA-WWAAY"..
-try not to think about tomorrow too seriously, what it will bring, you will be able to handle, it maybe rough at times, but how has eveyone lasted all of these years without a little problems here and there? Your dad will be with you forever, and he knows you care a lot about him now more than ever, stay strong.

--Brenton

[This message has been edited by TunaKaHuna (edited 07-08-2001).]

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
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3 posted 2001-07-08 09:42 PM

This was very heartfelt, touching, and honest. I wish you the best of luck. Thank you for posting it here for us to read.

Be kind, be true, be bold, be you.

Freedom comes when you learn to live unafraid.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-07-09 07:02 PM

Very nicely done here! I really liked one...quite touching.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-07-15 07:49 PM

Beautiful as usual Minna. I'd love to see more of your work in the future. Thanks for sharing.

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