Teen Poetry #5 |
Left and Shuddering Disposal of Evidence |
Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Poison my silky skin and dirty my delicate looking hands Give me something more something I can drown in and hide away from everything, from myself, from yesterday No matter what I grab there's always the question The question that drives me mad, the restlessness and hunger - my need to know why Ignore me and I'll give you hell Answer me and I'll steal you steal you away Feed me... I'm starving here.. "...if you want love you must be love.." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
...*shivers*...hahaha...the expression was VERY dark...and had some deep emotions in it...i enjoyed it a LOT. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I enjoyed this one. It was an interesting format, but it fit the poem very well. Nicely done. *Amanda* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
OOooo I really liked this. I dunno what it is exactly- But I just really really liked this. Great job! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Wooo...if this got any colder we would have to throw it in the oven to heat it up! There are tons of wows escaping my lips at the moment. Your expression is so dark and amazing that it really makes the words jump off the page! Excellent work, Dark. This is going into the library for sure! ~AF~ Never speak disrespectfully of Society. Only people who can't get into it do that. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
OOOOOOOO this was dark.........I LOVED IT! i love all ur pieces so far...........keep it up pleez! thanks 4 the read. fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
this is a really interesting piece.. i liked it. keep writing |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this was relaly nice. The ending was so errie.......haha I got this feeling you wanted to eat that person you were talking to. I liked it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
WOW! What an awesome way to end a poem! WONDERFUL job!! I enjoyed this VERY much. Keep sharing your work with us! --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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