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sad brown eyes
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since 2001-12-14
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0 posted 2002-01-24 10:12 AM


I miss you like a swky with no stars.
I feel so empty inside i dont know if i should tear.
But my body is full of fear.
My soul crys out not to let anyone in until you come back to where you belong with me.
I miss you so much its like a wall missing picturez.
I need you here with me,feeling me, loveing me.
Why did i do wrong?
My heart hasnt stoped crying sinced you left me and my body and bed feels so empty.
Why do i have to miss you like a lamp needs light?
I need u in my heart, my mind, my life.
Thinking about you makes me sane but,
knowing im here with out you makes me go insane.
Why do i have to miss you?
Why cant the sky,the walls,and lamps live with out their needs and desires?
So i dont have to cry for hours.
Please call me and tell me why i have to miss you the way heart and soul do.
I JUST HOPE YOUR MISSING ME TOO.


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since 2001-12-29
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1 posted 2002-01-25 01:48 AM


hey hey! umm, I guess I should welcome you here, I feel strange cause it wsan't long since people were welcoming me...but welcome!
I liked this! Very creative INDEED!

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2 posted 2002-01-26 11:44 PM


You expressed urself wonderfully in this poem...good job

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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