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Missing You |
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sad brown eyes Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 19Connecticut U.S |
I miss you like a swky with no stars. I feel so empty inside i dont know if i should tear. But my body is full of fear. My soul crys out not to let anyone in until you come back to where you belong with me. I miss you so much its like a wall missing picturez. I need you here with me,feeling me, loveing me. Why did i do wrong? My heart hasnt stoped crying sinced you left me and my body and bed feels so empty. Why do i have to miss you like a lamp needs light? I need u in my heart, my mind, my life. Thinking about you makes me sane but, knowing im here with out you makes me go insane. Why do i have to miss you? Why cant the sky,the walls,and lamps live with out their needs and desires? So i dont have to cry for hours. Please call me and tell me why i have to miss you the way heart and soul do. I JUST HOPE YOUR MISSING ME TOO. |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
hey hey! umm, I guess I should welcome you here, I feel strange cause it wsan't long since people were welcoming me...but welcome! I liked this! Very creative INDEED!  |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
You expressed urself wonderfully in this poem...good job yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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