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sad brown eyes
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0 posted 2002-01-24 09:38 AM



We know things might go wrong but were hiding that pain.
Pretending nothing is going to happen and everything is the same.
Even though inside our souls there became a little hole,
I promised you i would never go.
Showing my pain aint going to help anything.
So pretending everything will always stay the same, we laugh,talk, and play.
Pretending is the only way right now.
But maybe its not going to stay.
All this pretending just might go away and the pain will escape.
And our love wont evaporate.

© Copyright 2002 Renee - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-26 12:30 PM


I really enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing this with us

Zu

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2 posted 2002-01-26 11:34 PM


I relate to this completely...nice write

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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3 posted 2002-01-27 01:10 AM


Sad to read about stuff like this... it's all about miscommunication or lack thereof eh?
Oh wellz, good job.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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