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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Just wrote this.Late night inspiration from laying in bed and thinking to much. Cobwebs and shadows clutter in the corners around the spotlit center; like a marionette controlled; I dance to a merry tune of shattered glass and broken lies honest falsehoods and forgotten truths eyes upon me while your hand dangles above applaud me I do as told for the show, your show and when the crowd leaves I sit on your mantle collecting dust as you sleep. ex animo, Aaron There are no great men, only men in great circumstances. [This message has been edited by aaron woodside (01-22-2002 03:52 AM).] |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
HEY! erg i am so mad right now i cant get into my email, anywho Nice piece..kinda um...makin me think Well , good job! Email me! luv ya Amee Tis better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all... |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This was a very, very interesting poem to read. I liked your use of metaphors. I think that too often we're all the puppets of someone or something else. I suppose the real fun is trying to cut the strings. Thanks for posting this. Jaime  -- the calm before the storm -- jaimespoetry.blogspot.com [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (01-22-2002 12:23 PM).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"I dance to a merry tune of shattered glass and broken lies" This is beautiful, aaron. The thoughts in here are some that I can connect with... unfortunately enough. The images that you portrayed are very well-written, and the style of the line breaks is original. I enjoyed this. Very well done! --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Amee: Thnx hun. Sorry to make you think, I know how much you hate it.  I'll email you soon and tell you what this was about.Jaime: Thanx for the post. I kinna disagree about the fun being in cutting the strings, cuz that just seems to hurt too. (shrugs). But yes we are all puppets of someone else weather we know it or not. Marie: Ya I was really tired when I wrote this. It was about 3:00 in the morning and I couldn't sleep. It just kind of came to me. Anyway thnx for the post. Later ex animo, Aaron There are no great men, only men in great circumstances. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
hey hun..lol the second i saw your title i started singing "NO Strings Attached" by N'Sync lol but i guess they werent ur inspiration or atleast i dont think they were..hmm...i liked it a lot though, thanks for sharing yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
No no no not them. Lol nooooooo. Sorry not a big fan of them. . Thnx laterex animo, Aaron There are no great men, only men in great circumstances. |
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