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BrokenAngel
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0 posted 2002-01-23 08:14 PM


All my other relationships
They never worked out
Something would come up
Some one would step in between

Whenever I thought I was happy
Everything would go wrong
I would be left out in the cold
With only my broken heart to accompany me

I’ve been neglected
I’ve been abused
I’ve been hurt
I thought nothing would be right again

But then you come around
We meet under an unusual happening
It was like me and you are so much alike
It’s almost scary

I don’t know what to expect
I don’t know what to think or do
I can’t help but be scared
I don’t want to lose you

I guess I can only wait
I only hope nothing bad will happen
I’m trusting you with my heart
Please don’t break it

I don’t think I can take it

Dedicated to Thomas Tull

---Night Angel

© Copyright 2002 Hannah Rochelle Garner - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-23 08:34 PM


I truly hope that this one works out for you. Believe me, it is definately grand when you finally do fall in love with someone. Just be careful and don't give too much right away. As for the title... you'll know without a shadow of a doubt when you do fall in love with him. And no one will be able to tell you otherwise. Good luck, my friend, and remember to just have fun!

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2 posted 2002-01-24 04:56 PM


No one said love wasnt scary...i enjoyed this a lot..you really expressed the reality of unknown relationships and how your scared from what has occured in your past..im the same way w/some things...nicely done

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Shygirl82
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3 posted 2002-01-24 11:02 PM


I enjoyed this one...its scary when a relationship actually seems like its working...I hope everything turns out GREAT for you...Best of Luck!!
~Nikki~

Smile!!  You never know who may be falling in love with it...

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4 posted 2002-01-25 11:01 AM


I really like this one. I hope you're in love, and that this person loves you with all his heart. That's all you can really ask for in love.

Best of luck!!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

HopelessRomanticGuy
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5 posted 2002-01-25 02:21 PM


I hope this works out for you, that his love is true.  I still search for that love that we all hope you have found, but I wonder sometimes, does it exist?

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here?  Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

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6 posted 2002-01-29 04:46 PM


I hope things go your way
good luck, and don't hurry things
let it progress the way it's suppose to
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


FlipAngel02
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7 posted 2002-01-29 08:26 PM


Awesome poem, I can totally relate.  Keep up the good work

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