Teen Poetry #5 |
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Am I In Love? |
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BrokenAngel Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 141Puryear, TN, USA ![]() |
All my other relationships They never worked out Something would come up Some one would step in between Whenever I thought I was happy Everything would go wrong I would be left out in the cold With only my broken heart to accompany me I’ve been neglected I’ve been abused I’ve been hurt I thought nothing would be right again But then you come around We meet under an unusual happening It was like me and you are so much alike It’s almost scary I don’t know what to expect I don’t know what to think or do I can’t help but be scared I don’t want to lose you I guess I can only wait I only hope nothing bad will happen I’m trusting you with my heart Please don’t break it I don’t think I can take it Dedicated to Thomas Tull ---Night Angel |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I truly hope that this one works out for you. Believe me, it is definately grand when you finally do fall in love with someone. Just be careful and don't give too much right away. As for the title... you'll know without a shadow of a doubt when you do fall in love with him. And no one will be able to tell you otherwise. Good luck, my friend, and remember to just have fun! ![]() Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
No one said love wasnt scary...i enjoyed this a lot..you really expressed the reality of unknown relationships and how your scared from what has occured in your past..im the same way w/some things...nicely done ![]() yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
I enjoyed this one...its scary when a relationship actually seems like its working...I hope everything turns out GREAT for you...Best of Luck!! ~Nikki~ Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I really like this one. ![]() Best of luck!! ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I hope this works out for you, that his love is true. I still search for that love that we all hope you have found, but I wonder sometimes, does it exist? After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I hope things go your way good luck, and don't hurry things let it progress the way it's suppose to thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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FlipAngel02 New Member
since 2002-01-26
Posts 7Minnesota, USA |
Awesome poem, I can totally relate. Keep up the good work ![]() |
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