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Teen Poetry #5

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SlowDrag
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since 2002-01-10

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Tx...need i say more

0 posted 2002-01-29 11:22 PM

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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

1 posted 2002-01-30 01:21 AM

Hmmm... very strong words here... very strong feelings. Thank you for sharing this; if you ever need someone to talk to, my inbox is always open. *hugs*

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gymnast
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since 2001-11-18

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Scotland.

2 posted 2002-01-30 06:19 AM

This poem is great! Sorry to hear your upset! Hope everything works out for you! Keep up the good work though-you have a talent for poems!

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-01-30 05:10 PM

Your poem was powerful and full of emotion and feelings. Looks like u really poured ur anger out into this one...nicely done

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SlowDrag
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since 2002-01-10

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Tx...need i say more

4 posted 2002-01-30 10:46 PM

Thanks for your comments and concerns,
but there was no emotion poured into that song at all....no anger, it's just a song.
and truth be known, it's not even mine LOL...i jsut wnated to see what kind of replies it got, because half the time i write a song, and everyone tells me how they feel my anger...but i dont even feel that anger or whatever. haha i guess i'm not a poet, i think poets write more on feeling, song i just flow with the music.
well any moderators feel free to delete this poem if you like...anyone who would like to check it out it's by a group called "WaterDog"....a very good song

thanks though...

"Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..."

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