Teen Poetry #5 |
Smile All The Time |
CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Hello. This one I wrote tonight. People always tell me how the notice that I'm like, always smiling, not matter where I'm at. This is just kind a corny poetic explanation of why I'm always smiling... It's dumb, I know, but let me know what you think. SMILE ALL THE TIME I smile all the time Because I’m often confused If I smile I look like I know What’s going on Which leaves everybody else Confused with me So keep in mind When all else fails… Smile! - Cody - |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
Not your best, but good tough. It's quite true. I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you? |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"If I smile I look like I know What’s going on" I love it!!!! It's not dumb at all, it's poetic genius in my opinion!!! Great job Cody!! Thanks for sharing this one as well! Do you mind if I print it out and stick it on my binder? LMAO... so great!! Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
LoL this is kinda funny...i enjoyed this cody! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
SO TRUE!! This made me think of how often those around me feel like they need to wear masks... smile even it hurts to smile. And.. you're not smiling in your picture! Well done, Cody. I enjoyed this. Hope to see more soon.. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cody- LOL...this is cute. Made me smile with you.. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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