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Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2002-02-23 08:47 PM

I tried to go on with life without you
I can't.
walking down the hall
without you by my side
is the hardest thing
you dont know how it feels
because my hand is now another girls hand.
I once loved you,
until you stopped loving me.
I know you dont love me now but
you say you still love me,
but you love another girl.
So how can that be?
So you dont love me?
you might say big deal..so what?
but I loved him
like no other.
I look up to you as an older brother now
but a brother isnt what I need.
I want a man a guy
who will take away my fears
hold me in there arms
and give me butterfly kisses until the sun comes up
Don't we all want that?
I once had that
until he lost his love,
and loved another.

"Water Over Matter"

gracianna
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 165
A 14 year hell

1 posted 2002-02-23 09:03 PM

Wow...very deep. I like it. I hope you are ok...

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-02-24 12:11 PM

Im sorry sweety

::hugs::

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2002-02-26 05:20 PM

Awwwwwww..... come here you! :squeeze; A very sad, and vivid piece here. Well done Lisa...

Sincerely,
Titus

The One, The Only... The Titus.

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (02-26-2002 05:21 PM).]

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

4 posted 2002-02-26 07:07 PM

*hugs you* I know I don't know you, but I do know you put much feeling behind your words, it hurts, it really does I know..I really don't know what words to comfort you..but I wish you well..and all the love in the world..

Love,
Kristen

xerxes
Junior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 34

5 posted 2002-02-27 01:22 AM

deeply moving, though very touching, your emotions flow hard like a raging river, beautiful work.
-Xerxes

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2002-02-28 05:27 AM

...*sigh*..i think thats the second sad sigh ive made today...thanks for sharing

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

7 posted 2002-02-28 07:12 AM

Don't we all want that?
I once had that
until he lost his love,
and loved another.

I really like that part. Your poem sums up my life in the past couple months. I just found out my ex (who i spent 2 years with) has been with a new girl for the longest! Im glad my "friends" were able to tell me that.

Well anyways good poem! Im glad that you shared it!!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

See me?
Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

8 posted 2002-02-28 01:32 PM

this is great nicely thought out, i can relate so well, Clare xx

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

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