Teen Poetry #5 |
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tired of your sad today |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
today i woke up with Death beside me his cold arms wrapped around my fragile body content i sigh i am where i belong where i should have been since the moment of my birth his body is swollen with other people's tears softly i whisper into his rotten ear nothing is true and i'm tired of this sad today but at least my mind is empty and this wonderful numbness makes all the pain go away bergundy maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
wow...u brought me back to a place where i use to be every morning and a place where i somewhat miss...you describe it so well..amazing job yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I just absolutely love reading poems like this. Fat full of emotions, depth, and darkness. ![]() ********************* nothing is true and i'm tired of this sad today but at least my mind is empty and this wonderful numbness makes all the pain go away ********************* That was my favorite part, but the entire poem was very well written. Thank you so much for posting this poem. Jaime [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (01-20-2002 01:20 PM).] |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh wow... Bergundy, this is amazing. THe personfication of death was fantastic. "his body is swollen with other people's tears" Those were my favorite lines, by far. Excellent work.. just excellent. I look forward to reading more. ![]() --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
wow you guys are really nice. i read your replys and smiled, thank you for replying = ) -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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