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FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13
Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

0 posted 2002-01-24 01:57 PM


Dedicated to:
Carl McLeod
1-12-34 to 1-16-02
Rest in Peace
---------------------------------
A few shed tears,
for the man of 68 years,
a father, husband, brother, man,
in the Depression, life began.

A man in service of his country,
a man who, family first,
loved America, plants, cactus,
a man, who always knew how
to make his two daughters feel,
like millionaires.

A man who always knew how to
laugh, and to make others,
do the same,
a man who loved everything,
everyone he sees.

A man, who as a father, husband,
we were unworthy.
A man, who served his country,
28 years, 24 Coast Guard,
4 Navy.

A man, who was humble, yet at the same time,
great.

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

© Copyright 2002 Karen Cloud - All Rights Reserved
HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29
Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada
1 posted 2002-01-25 03:11 AM


...I'm speechless... great words of gratitude... I was very touched by this poem. He'd be proud.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
2 posted 2002-01-25 11:27 PM


wow,I can't even imagine how painful this must have been for you.
I'm sorry about your loss,its great to have poetry for an emotional vent eh?
take care&hang in there

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you.  Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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