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Patty o'brien
New Member

since 2001-10-07

Posts 4

0 posted 2002-01-18 01:36 PM

Gotta get back up
Gotta walk a couple feet
Gotta hide my wounds
Never show them that I'm beat

Cant tell if Im awake
Or if Im just sleeping
Cant tell if Im alive
or if im just dreaming

Would it really be that bad
If you never really knew
If youd found it out
Would you hopes have come true

You shouldnt ever fake the feelings
That you never really showed
Because they might care
But you never could've known

Never say I love you
If you really dont mean it
Never say your feelings
when youre heart isnt in it

lone_poet707
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

1 posted 2002-01-18 03:08 PM

wow....lotta new members since i waz last here...this is an excellent piece. there are many ppl who fit into this poem perfectly, u just have to be strong and get past their ignorance to ur feelings. Anywho, hope to see more from u. U have talent, dont let it go to waste!
-Joe

LCsftball16
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 39

2 posted 2002-01-18 04:43 PM

i'm kinda goin through this right now... weird situation for me lol.. n e wayz. love the write! can't wait to read more!

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2002-01-18 07:37 PM

Excellent poem! and very true too

A life without love…is no life at all.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-01-18 10:46 PM

I've had this happen to me for a long time last year...its a horrible way to get by ..::hugs:: stay strong hun but dont be scared to fall if it comes down to that...the mask and shield will only help you for so long..

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

5 posted 2002-01-18 10:51 PM

Wow!!! I know thats what every one else is saying but thats all I can say. It's happened to me also, he went as far as to ask me to marry him!! But keep up the good work and always keep your head up!!

---Night Angel

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

6 posted 2002-01-19 12:35 PM

I really like what you've written here!!

Especially:
Never say I love you
If you really dont mean it
Never say your feelings
when youre heart isnt in it

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2002-01-19 05:30 PM

"You shouldnt ever fake the feelings
That you never really showed"

VERY TRUE! I really enjoyed this... This has a very good message.. something that everyone should read. Well done! I look forward to more..

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

Watergun*Angel
New Member

since 2001-12-20

Posts 8
La la land

8 posted 2002-01-20 09:12 PM

It was amazing. I can relate to it a little. Great read!

*Sarah*

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

9 posted 2002-01-20 09:59 PM

"Never say I love you
If you really dont mean it
Never say your feelings
when youre heart isnt in it"

Amen. ^_^ Such a down to earth post! Too many times are those words "I love you" misused. It was wise of you to point that out. Thanks for sharing!

-Leah

HVNsnt82086
Junior Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 30
United States

10 posted 2002-01-21 01:51 AM

i really liked this. it seemed to me as kinda like a "face-the-truth" type poem. it had a lot of truth to it. keep up the great work!

"So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~

[This message has been edited by HVNsnt82086 (01-21-2002 01:52 AM).]

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