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xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2002-01-18 10:17 AM

Stuck in the past,
Never enjoying the day.
Wondering what will happen tomorrow,
When its 10 hours away.
Tripping over my own two feet,
Stumbling to the ground.
Locked inside the memories,
Never to be found.
I so desperately want to hold on,
To the things that are now changed.
I dont want to let go,
To my life thats been re-arranged.
I'm still stuck in my 15 year old self,
I guess 16 just doesnt do..
All i want is a sense of direction,
Instead i just fall over all of you.
I have to get over myself,
Move on to a better day.
Its so hard when you re-live your past,
In every imaginable way.
Time doesnt stop for pity,
The world turns reguardless of your tears.
Life moves on with their everyday life,
The sun will rise reguardless of your fears.

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

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viginia

1 posted 2002-01-18 12:40 PM

this piece is very true and very beautiful, it is too easy sometimes to wallow in the past and let it blind you to the possiblities of the future. keep posting your work

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

TigerZ
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since 2002-01-02

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2 posted 2002-01-18 07:46 PM

=) like it very much...and its very true...=)

A life without love…is no life at all.

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-01-18 10:42 PM

Thanks guys for your replies

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Jenn Cirrincione

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4 posted 2002-01-19 10:27 AM

Ahhhh so true!! I loved this. Nice work. Kinda reminds me of U2's Stucki n a Moment.

Jenn

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

Mon Cherie

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Land of Never-ending Summers

5 posted 2002-01-19 11:07 AM

This is oh so true... especially near the end when you said time does not stop for pity...

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Florence

PoetryIsLife

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...in my boxers...

6 posted 2002-01-19 01:29 PM

Wow! I loved it!

By far, the best I've read in a while. A very true, vivid, and real piece.

Again, a wonderful write. I loved it. Superbly done.

Sincerely,
Titus

Smile, Jesus loves you. :)

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

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Up in the mountains in the NFC

7 posted 2002-01-19 03:28 PM

This was a very good piece, as usual. I haven't been around in a while. It's good to see things haven't changed
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2002-01-19 03:38 PM

im glad to see that you guys enjoyed this

thanks for reading

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

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Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2002-01-19 06:04 PM

I completely agree with banbury.

"Life moves on with their everyday life,
The sun will rise reguardless of your fears."

That is so true. This is a beautiful piece... it's refreshing to see a positive poem in PIP. You have a lot of insights that I love.
Very well done, Michele! Looking forward to more...

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

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Kokomo,IN,USA

10 posted 2002-01-21 04:39 PM

oO0oOo0o...i liked the last 4 lines. ALOT...oo oo oo lol. sorry...neways. Awesome poem. Maybe one of the best ive read by you. You just keep getting better and better

Keep it up Michi

**Kiley

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Ceinwyn
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VA

11 posted 2002-01-21 07:13 PM

I have to agree with everyone..Loved it..the words just hit a chord..

Kristen

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

12 posted 2002-01-22 12:04 PM

Thanks guys

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

TopGunLauren
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13 posted 2002-01-22 12:52 PM

Yeah well personally I'm not just stuck in yesterday my whole life revolves around yesterday and the past.But anyway awsome poem like usual and I can't wait to read more.

Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

"You've got to get yourself together you got stuck in a moment and y

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