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Teen Poetry #5

How it all began?

Xeonox

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since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-21 01:35 AM

When we first met,
We decided to chat,

Then I felt good,
Wondering you also would,

Small talks became important,

For your voice became potent,

Finally I decided to ask,

When everything seemed right,
And you by my side,

I made the appeal,
Telling you how I feel,

With a moment of peace,
You replied with a kiss,

And that’s how it began.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

1 posted 2002-01-21 09:22 AM

Awwww... that's sweet! The best of luck to you both

I enjoyed this. Very good work!

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-01-21 12:48 PM

This was so cute...it as a poetic story with a beautiful ending..

Nicely done! Keep em comin!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Xeonox

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since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2002-01-21 04:22 PM

thank you for the comical response. However fading away, this poem is based on fiction.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

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4 posted 2002-01-22 01:01 PM

Normally I don't enjoy reading poems that are "mushy" as some would say, but this I really did enjoy. Actually, because it wasn't "mushy". It was about the beginnings of two people coming together, but it was just written in a way that was interesting. Thanks for posting this.

Jaime

-- the calm before the storm --

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