Teen Poetry #5 |
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One more..UNTITLED |
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AshlieAcklin New Member
since 2002-01-17
Posts 6 |
This may be a repost, but it is one of my favorites. ENJOY ![]() Mascara Flavored Tears So many unforgettable mistakes Mistakes I pay for every day People can be so [edit] cruel Hopelessness, Confusion, Undescribable Uncertainties Insecurity, Embarrassment, Shame Slowly devouring my exposed body Sleep - my only escape Dreading daybreak Welcome to another pathetic day Can someone please end this obsolete existance Impossible AMA 1-11-01 [This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (01-20-2002 01:16 PM).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow...this really hit home for me...a big part of my life was like this and it lasted for a LONG time..i know how your feeling...::hugs:: yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I really enjoyed the read, you a really good poet and I'd liek to see more of your work ![]() "All things must end, but I can see my fate in your eyes" -Turin Breaks |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Good work. I enjoyed this, but be careful about the language in the future ![]() I've enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to seeing more. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I really liked this poem. It had some desperation, anger, sadness in it expressed very, very well. You have a way of wording your emotions that really gets the point across. Jaime -- the calm before the storm -- |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
So true. But what happens to the people (me) who retreat to sleep, only to find pain and hurt in their dreams? Or are they nightmares... |
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