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Watergun*Angel
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since 2001-12-20

Posts 8
La la land

0 posted 2002-01-17 08:45 PM

I don't know what to do
I told you I like you
You said you like me
But where does she fit in?

You told me...
You don't wanna go out
Cuz of the way you are
And don't wanna hurt anyone
But where does she come into this?

I care about you so much
You don't wanna hurt me
I've been hurt worse than you think
So it doens't matter
But where does she belong?

Most of what I feel is about you
You just don't understand
You thought we were just friends
And nothing was going on
But what is with her?

I don't know if I should believe you
With what your telling me
Or is it just one big lie
Trying to hurt me so I forget about you
But why do you want her?

Oh I get it
You don't want me
Cuz of the things I won't do
But she will?

I'm not giving you up easy
It's gonna be a fight to the end
Or the decision you'll have to make,
Me or Her?

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-01-17 08:47 PM

Welcome To Passions!!!!

What a yucky situation your in...i hope things work out in your favor in the end

Keep on postin

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

2 posted 2002-01-17 10:00 PM

great post, i was in this situation about a year and a half and it sucks BAD... good luck...
*Justine*

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

3 posted 2002-01-17 10:52 PM

A tug of war about a guy. Be careful of your steps as an ultimatum could lead to you losing him altogether! Be careful, good luck and don't hurt yourself!

MelZ!!

AshlieAcklin
New Member

since 2002-01-17

Posts 6

4 posted 2002-01-18 12:14 PM

I love this poem. The repetitive but somewhat different questions at the end of each stanza very much caught my eye...
going through a very similar situation..good luck sweetheart. (Guys are buttheads!!) :0)

Keep it UP
AMA

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2002-01-18 03:00 AM

Good way to express your feelings, eh? <- sorry for my canadian "eh" *grinz* But anyway, hope that guy sees things in a different view, guys who just see things through one eye are missing out on a lot of stuff. Good job!

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2002-01-19 04:37 PM

Welcome to Passions!!

I really enjoyed this poem. It sounds like a tough situation, but good luck with it. I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting

)

--Marie - Moderator/Passions in Poetry

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

7 posted 2002-01-19 04:39 PM

Welcome to passions I really enjoyed the read and hope to see more of your work around

Andrew

"All things must end, but I can see my fate in your eyes" -Turin Breaks

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