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Ree Ree Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 56providence, RI |
-- This poem is under review -- |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Sounds like there's a big miscommunication between the two people you'd written about. But it's good to see that one of them understands that life moves on and does so. Good job!  "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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AshlieAcklin New Member
since 2002-01-17
Posts 6 |
I enjoyed this poem. Read it over a couple times and tried to understand the true underlying meaning. I believe I will read it a couple more times. :0) Can't wait to see more -AMA |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great job on this one ree ree...you expressed your feelings nicely yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Ree Ree Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 56providence, RI |
sorry it got posted twice, for some reason it just did that. I posted this same message in the first one, but no one got it, sorry. Again, i can't take credit for this work, but i thought it was such a kewl poem, i just had to share it on here. My friend is thankful to hear any constructive critisism and stuff..thanks for reading.... : ) |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"you've gone through everything to find this to find me. in this empty praking lot, start anew." Lots of emotions here. I really liked this... you write it very well and expressively. Job well done I look forward to seeing more. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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