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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2002-01-16 02:56 PM

You wish to understand me?
Then assist in the rebuilding of
This miserable existence called my life
Wipe away this darkness and isolation
You ask to be let in but if I agree
You run, shattering my trust and
Causing me to build my wall even higher
Many say they understand but how many really do?
I've been called a light by many,
A counsellor by some
Others say the gift of Prophecy has been
Bestowed upon me
That may be so; I don't know
One has called me a bright star in the night sky
I appreciate that greatly
That one understands life at its worst
That one doesn't know how highly I think of him
Maybe he'll read this, maybe he won't
Maybe he's here, maybe he's not
But he'll understand whether he reads it or not
Life is ended in a heartbeat
I mourn the stupidity of some
How can they do that to themselves?
To their parents?
To their friends?
And yet, I can't help but think,
Who would mourn me if I did that?
Who would cry?
Who would carry on?
But I'm not that stupid
I may have shut myself off from the
So-called real world
But I will not do that.

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

1 posted 2002-01-16 03:46 PM

For some reason this poem reminded me of the line, "there are worse things I could do". You know the misunderstood girl from Grease who sings that song. That's actually my favorite part of the movie. Anywho...

So much can be revealed in isolation. What we choose to do with the "new" information is our choice. I hope you can make something of all this. Good luck... since I know that's the tricky part.

Thank you for posting this. It was a very enjoyable read full of emotion, depth, and wisdom.

-- the calm before the storm --

jaimespoetry.blogspot.c

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (01-16-2002 03:48 PM).]

Hardkore
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since 2001-01-31

Posts 33
San DIego, California

2 posted 2002-01-16 10:31 PM

I liked this poem a lot.... Honesty....Insight....Good flow....Emotional....Big words

I liked it a lot

Passion fuels my love
Passion becomes consumed by my love
Without my love I become passionless

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

3 posted 2002-01-16 11:11 PM

bravo!! nicely done!! yeaayayyaaay! *claps*

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2002-01-17 09:54 AM

Hard situation... seems like you're going through trying times. Hope things look up.

Well done.

I enjoyed this.

--Marie

'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.'

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2002-01-17 06:13 PM

Sky,

All I can say is, I loved this piece, it was wonderfully written, deep, emotional, and, a good write. Also, I'll do my best to be the shoulder I've tried to be for you when life get's trying. I'll continue to pray, my friend. God bless, and I'll talk with you soon. You're a great friend. Again, a wonderful write.

Sincerley,
Titus

"Shot to the heart,
and you're to blame...
Darling, you give love a bad name."
- Bon Jovi

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

6 posted 2002-01-23 09:28 AM

Such a wonderful poem, I just remembered that I hadn't replied to it, I loved reading this the first time but it was even more delightful the fifth

Find me a problem a pigeon can't solve and I'll find you a pigeon to solve it.

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